Good poem. I like the rhyming of the title.

~Twilight Starr~

gorgeous. i love the incorportation of the line from ring around the rosey... it's placed brilliantly. i love it.-aly

Beautiful again.

"lashes(to ashes, we allfalldown)" It breaks up the poem and brings it together.

Great job, I cant wait to read more from you.

Very nice. the imagery is impressive. Keep writing!

Beautiful.

~* Noelle