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| Black and White Dreams 2006-08-11 ch 1,  | abuseSo beautiful! The lines that really stood out for me are: "I’ve learned a lot about people throughout my life. There are people who see life the way they want to see it, and people who see life the way it really is." "It’s a storyline. A plot and a deathly ending. Sort of like the story of my life." "So sing your sweetest song, so I can finally fall to my misery." "I really don’t think that I’ve found the ‘one‘ yet. You know how I know? I don’t miss him when we’re apart." "I’ve lived the life that a million people would kill for…but that’s only in my head." "I want to possess your soul; do you have one?" Those lines make me feel so understood. That's how I feel every day of my life. Pretty depressing, isin't it? *::~Cat~::* |
| angel953 2006-08-08 ch 1, | abuseI love this Kate!! Thanks for the review!! :D |
| myheartbelongstosuperman 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. There are some really good lines in here... "True love. I think it depends on what time it is" was one that really stood out for me. |