Wow! Lame word I know but this is the word that ran through my head when I read this. It's a breathtaking piece and I hope that there was another try.

Nice look into your depths as these recurring motifs come to light...

Wow! This is one of the greater pieces on ff.n, for sure. Rhyming, imagery, flowingness...I love it.

Wow, simply no words. Beautiful imagery, and an almost celestial feel too it. I absolutely love it, this is going on my favourts. I cant express enough how much I love this peice. Well done. keep up the amazing work10/10 from me!