 silentscreamer07 2006-08-26 . chapter 1*wow* This was so very extremely truthful. Words can hurt someone so much. And the ones that are just carelessly said, can really hurt the worst. I loved the words you used, and the Angst feel to this..although, it wasn't really angst, just truthful.
The title! AH! Loved it! And you tied it in beautifully with your poem. I don't think you could've made it any better.
"By a death that they found Bitter.But a victory she found Sweet."
LOVED THOSE LINES! It was a perfect way to end this too. Great job on this! It def. earned some brownie points! :D *keep writing* hope to see ore posted by you soon!
~britney :D |