 imcherish08 2008-03-31 . chapter 1Hum, I'm not very good with poetry interpreting. *Not deep, Ha!*
Here's what i got from it:
The "chimney sweeper king" refers to maybe the leader of a country, or some kind of leader who has to clean up "soot" ( with soot being the problems of the world). In a way the chimney sweeper is like a savior to the people covered in soot. Oh, look at me being deep! I hope i got that right...
It made me think and that's why i liked it. |
 Le Cosmonaute 2007-10-18 . chapter 1Amazingly written! This is just beautiful, and the line breaks and word order is neat to read, as well. It's, for lack of a beter word, powerful, deep, etc. Good work, here. |
 reluctant writer 2006-08-08 . chapter 1Like the transition between Aleksandr before and after. The subtle rhymes were well-done, as was the ending. |
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