Reviews for Kye and Mateus Sequel

Reviews For: Kye and Mateus Sequel - Reviews: Page 1 of 3

Krysti marsh 2007-07-31 ch 5, anon.	abuseIt's got me hooked...really good...can't wait for more... xx
Cardi 2007-01-13 ch 5,	abuseYay! Good chapter. Can't wait for the next one!
Noihseret 2007-01-13 ch 5,	abuseoh no, Kakao! lol, poor little guy. I like him ^^ even though he is probably going to cause some trouble for our two loverbird heroes... write on!
Eric Lupin 2007-01-13 ch 5,	abuseOh no, Kakao's turning bad! Hope that Mateus and Kye work things out with the 'family'! Well written as always! Eric
Aki to Tarou 2007-01-13 ch 5,	abuseHmm... I wonder if Kiyoshi and Mateus have done it yet... ANYWAY, AS FOR THE REVIEW- oh goodness gracious, little Kakao saw the two love-birds holding hands :o. Kye was being a little too careless I suppose- I think Kakao has a brother complex :3. Seems a little protective of onii-chan eh? x3 Well, he's going to have to learn that two daddys holding hands is all right too! ...he's not going to like it is he? D: Keep up the writing ^^. ~Sei.
Noihseret 2007-01-12 ch 4,	abusenope,definately not liking Kye's mom. (Matti's so cute!) I loved the culture in this, it really feels like Japan ^^ keep up the great work! (I want to know more about Kakao,too. that's funny about his name. it sure does look Japanese)
Noihseret 2007-01-12 ch 3,	abuseo...I am not liking Kye's mom one bit. Kye's siblings are cute though ^^ I like them (even thought they didn't notice Mateus...)
DiamondKing 2006-12-27 ch 4,	abuseOne word: Kawaii!! You got the suffixes right; chan is used for friends and people who are younger than the speaker, san for those who are older "Okaa-san" and acts as sort of Mr. and Ms. as well, etc., etc. But this story is really cute and I adore Mateus. I can't wait for the next chappie! ~DiamondKing
Aki to Tarou 2006-12-17 ch 4,	abuseSorry I took so long to read your sequel but I have finally read it!! >.>;; I really like how you started this out. The imagery in chapter two in particular was lovely~ you have mad writing skillz yo xP. Good flow, rhythm and transitions; I noticed improvements :D. (I should learn how to transition and flow better..
a creature 2006-12-01 ch 4,	abuseGreat story, old Chap! Keep it up now you hear?!
Cardi 2006-11-30 ch 4,	abuseYay! Can't wait to find out what Kakao's role is.
Cedric Kale 2006-11-30 ch 4,	abusewee back again more from Kye and Matti yea. oh and i have some things to say, erm you know when Kakao came running along called Kye he should say "Kiyoshi-san" showing respect and i thought Kye was the uke in this story, since he is the uke shouldn't he be shorter than most of the men in the village as ukes go since ukes are small adorable tiny things at least most of the time. oh my god ok u can slap me now kk i'm sorry for critizing you, wait what is going on have they found out about the relationship between Matti and Kye or have theynot Daisuki
Do Not Feed this Animal 2006-11-27 ch 3,	abuseHappy yet? I'm enjoying this one Derek, keep writing and hope you get over your writers block soon! Jed.
Callum Sirryn-Sehnya 2006-11-18 ch 3,	abuseYo, what's up with his mother? I think Mateus is going to get a serious ** thrashing. Poor guy. Ouch. Anyway, I love the way you described everything, the house, the garden, the children, EVREYTHING! It was beautiful and even though there isn't much action in the story at the moment, the story doesn't feel empty and lifeless. I admire the way you write, because you get a wonderful balance of everything. There is enough speech in it to for characters to hold a proper conversation with one-another, enough naivity from children to make it witty without wrecking the whole scene. Enough narrative to give you a clear picture of surroundings and enough display of emotions and feeling to make the characters seem real. I know that seems like a real lecture and it was a chore writing it, but I really needed to point it all out because this is going to be your best yet! Although it's ANOTHER about male/male love...I think I can ignore it and just read the story. I think I'll try pretending that Kiyoshi is actually a girl. That'll work! ^^ Wonderful start and I reckon this is going to make another record with reviews! I hope it does, because you deserve them. Geez that was one of the longest reviews I think I have ever sent, but I just had so much to say! Cal
Cardi 2006-11-17 ch 3,	abuseAnother great chapter! (sorry it's taking me so long to review.. stupid exams are starting the day after tomorrow, and my dearest mother thinks that banning me from the computer will equal more study. Oh, how naive she is..) I can't wait to find out more about Kye's family, and how the rest of the react to Mateus! ~Cardi

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