Hmm..I think I like the "do"s. and it's pretty good for a venting poem :)

'Twas good, but you made a lot of grammatical mistakes. Like, every line when you state that "So and so never DO last", it should be does. Sorry that I have to be so picky about that, but I really enjoyed your poem, and thought it was really very...deep. Urm...I didn't want to sign in, so sorry for the unsigned review. D: