Nice! I'm not big on abstract poetry but this is really good! Keep up the good work!
~Anna

I'm too lazy to sign in, but hey, I read your poetry, good stuff, man. Not a lot of guys can think that deep and not be all depressed, nice!

This is also very good. It has some depth to it.

I love it... reminds me of Lord Of The Flies and of Kingdom Hearts (much sorry if you're going '...eh?' PS2 game... sorry ^_^; )

It's deep... I love it. The repetition of a few points works well; it doesn't seem repetitive. The eternal light, the eternal hope...

...I love it. My parents are rushing me to get off the comp but I want to come back and read this again...

...and I love the name Dante ^_^ hey, it's not real, but neither is Aquila...

~Aquila.Strife