This is good. What is it about? The title is excellent and the poem has lots of emotion. This is one of those poems that demands an eloquent silence after reading. Excellent. There were a few choppy lines, but I really do like this a lot, especially the phrase "In those big brown boxes marked: Camping Gear". That really brought the personal touch to the poem.

Thanks for the review. I go between loving and hating Scream. It's kind of stream-of-conciousness, which definately isn't my "style," but who says we can't venture out of our little boxes?

-Xero

Wow, a wonderful peace.

ah. very good. really very good. I might have not ended it happily, but I'm really morbid sometimes :p

Yeah, I like it. I wonder what was the truth that was hidden?

WINKS

You have such a great and amazing way of writing poetry, you really manage to capture all of ur emotions. I luv ur stuff *Adds 2 favs*

Interesting poem, I like the way you spaced it out.

This brings back a lot of memories.Lovely poem.

Wow the same thing happened to me with one of my old best friends he only was my friend cause i knew the girl that he liked

loved it, i really liked the end a lot, great peice, thank you for the review and thank you for sharing

It's confusing, but I like it. Check over it for a few minor spelling errors though.

Katrina

i think this is good, just a few question marks in the wrong places. Other than that it is good!