Could not have broke me...broken

I like this.. I think its very relateable and true.. the only thing i didnt like is how it went from first person to third.. that seemed a bit off

yes sometimes guys are the lowest creatures to walk the planet and should be lower than scum since there are guys who do stuff like that all the time. it's like they love u one night and the next day... they don't, and it's stupid and mean. it's like they just take you heart only to break it.

i'll stop rambling now. anyways nice poem, especially for those of us who can relate. keep writing!

Wow, I like the ryming. I can never fit that into my poems. Good job!
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(^.^)0 (the Melodious Nocturne)

well, it's really heartfelt, to me, in some way the poem is sweet, I guess, like bitter-sweet.

Indeed males are evil :P. This was a really emotive and thoughtfull poem. well done.

I wont sit here and defend my fellow dudes for being complete tools sometimes, and I will instead commend you on a poem that captures a mood very well. :)

wow... amen sista! men really can be jerks and it's hard to find one that's not. i love how u wrote it tho and how it flowed and rhymed. keep writing! ^-^ and i'm returning the review

Omg this poem is so sad but great.It really does prove how evil males can be.

*applause*
I loved it.

Hug. Skittles for you! look i'm REVIEWING TO SOMETHING!

So can totally relate. Just got my heart shattered and i feel the pian. Nice work

When i first hit your profile. This name caught my eye immediatly, being a male and all.

This poem scared me in a way that shook me. As i read what you had written i began to see myself in those words. It really shocked me. Lines 14 and 15 inparticular. Very nice. I shall now probably have to go read everything else you have.

Ralphie2

Good here, I know that you most likely know this, and others have told you, but not all guys are bad. Though usually those guys don't have much luck with "the ladies".

yea! thank you, and go girls! (sorry, that's my overly femenist side showing) anyways, great poem, great word choice, and great feeling. it's really good.

Love it! I just love your work!it was strong