 Mienaku 2009-04-23 . chapter 1I don't know, but for some reason this poem struck me as cute. Like a person sitting back and thinking on the craziness of their youth. If that makes any sense? |
 .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2007-02-22 . chapter 1I know that feeling...
Well, most of the time. My school is so small that everyone knows everyone else and puts up with everyone else. [sad but true: in my town, it is common to find that the best player on the basketball team also happens to be a band geek] Oh goodness, look, I'm good at rambling too...
Congratulations on getting this published! It was so realistic and true... not much else to say.
-stixerz- |
 Nickster25 2006-11-05 . chapter 1I think most people feel like this, I know I do. Great job! |
 Pretty Peaceful 2006-09-29 . chapter 1oh my god this is so good. i especially love the last 7 lines.. i have felt like this so many times... wow. id really appreciate if you had a look at some of my work.. no pressure of course. peace and love from holly. ps. this is on my favourite stories. |
 sarah1491 2006-09-23 . chapter 1Nice poem, it seems kinda sad though. very emotion-filled! |
 Dabronicci 2006-09-21 . chapter 1I will be honest, I did not think the poem it self was all that spectacular. I did love the idea you tried to convey, but I felt it was executed poorly. Some grammar could of helped out greatly also. I am sorry I couldn't just give you one of those fantastic generic one line reviews, but I had to be honest. Not all that spectacular. |
 fallin4ualwayz 2006-09-21 . chapter 1love it! |
 fairytale failure 2006-09-16 . chapter 1just had to love the lines, I was not a normal babyBut then either was Frankenstein.too perfect! XD |
 vampiric-happenings 2006-09-12 . chapter 1i cannot say that i relate. i do not wish to 'fit in'(whatever that truly means), for in my mind that is the relinquish of power over myself and opinions to 'them'. i am weird and very proud to be so!
now to the mistakes, they were few; 'then either was'-neither, 'I’m to weird'-too, & 'the read world'-real.
i do really enjoy your poem. very goo writing. i am happy for you that you are getting it published as well as the other that was stated on ur page. you are quite good!
-thank you for the review! it made me quite happy. i am a miss noël- :) |
 Princess-anna57 2006-09-09 . chapter 1Wow, that's so sad! So well written though. Excellent! Write on!
~Anna~ ^_^ |
 Complications 2006-09-05 . chapter 1you've a cute style. it's like no matter what your saying, it some how feels sweet. and I like your little dedications. |
 Chaos Apple 2006-09-01 . chapter 1Gorgeous and painful and god(!) it just hit home.
I can relate-to an extent- and the way you worded this is .b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l.-great write.
♥ Alice |
 polka dots and addictions 2006-09-01 . chapter 1"And so what if I’m to weird/For the weird kids at school?"
i LOVE those lines (but the to should be too)nice poem, the beginning is interesting.
~Bex x |
 Love-and- Lust 2006-08-28 . chapter 1i like , we need to talk dude e-miail or im |
 Midnight Star Lights 2006-08-25 . chapter 1I really love this. Got to read more of your work...
SMILES |