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Mienaku 2009-04-23 . chapter 1
I don't know, but for some reason this poem struck me as cute. Like a person sitting back and thinking on the craziness of their youth. If that makes any sense?
.mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2007-02-22 . chapter 1
I know that feeling...

Well, most of the time. My school is so small that everyone knows everyone else and puts up with everyone else. [sad but true: in my town, it is common to find that the best player on the basketball team also happens to be a band geek] Oh goodness, look, I'm good at rambling too...

Congratulations on getting this published! It was so realistic and true... not much else to say.

-stixerz-
Nickster25 2006-11-05 . chapter 1
I think most people feel like this, I know I do. Great job!
Pretty Peaceful 2006-09-29 . chapter 1
oh my god this is so good. i especially love the last 7 lines.. i have felt like this so many times... wow. id really appreciate if you had a look at some of my work.. no pressure of course. peace and love from holly. ps. this is on my favourite stories.
sarah1491 2006-09-23 . chapter 1
Nice poem, it seems kinda sad though. very emotion-filled!
Dabronicci 2006-09-21 . chapter 1
I will be honest, I did not think the poem it self was all that spectacular. I did love the idea you tried to convey, but I felt it was executed poorly. Some grammar could of helped out greatly also. I am sorry I couldn't just give you one of those fantastic generic one line reviews, but I had to be honest. Not all that spectacular.
fallin4ualwayz 2006-09-21 . chapter 1
love it!
fairytale failure 2006-09-16 . chapter 1
just had to love the lines, I was not a normal babyBut then either was Frankenstein.too perfect! XD
vampiric-happenings 2006-09-12 . chapter 1
i cannot say that i relate. i do not wish to 'fit in'(whatever that truly means), for in my mind that is the relinquish of power over myself and opinions to 'them'. i am weird and very proud to be so!

now to the mistakes, they were few; 'then either was'-neither, 'I’m to weird'-too, & 'the read world'-real.

i do really enjoy your poem. very goo writing. i am happy for you that you are getting it published as well as the other that was stated on ur page. you are quite good!

-thank you for the review! it made me quite happy. i am a miss noël- :)
Princess-anna57 2006-09-09 . chapter 1
Wow, that's so sad! So well written though. Excellent! Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^
Complications 2006-09-05 . chapter 1
you've a cute style. it's like no matter what your saying, it some how feels sweet. and I like your little dedications.
Chaos Apple 2006-09-01 . chapter 1
Gorgeous and painful and god(!) it just hit home.

I can relate-to an extent- and the way you worded this is .b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l.-great write.

♥ Alice
polka dots and addictions 2006-09-01 . chapter 1
"And so what if I’m to weird/For the weird kids at school?"

i LOVE those lines (but the to should be too)nice poem, the beginning is interesting.

~Bex x
Love-and- Lust 2006-08-28 . chapter 1
i like , we need to talk dude e-miail or im
Midnight Star Lights 2006-08-25 . chapter 1
I really love this. Got to read more of your work...

SMILES
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