It isn't terribly original...it's very simple, and that's fine, but admittedly immature. Why would anyone drink blood, anyway?

Very simple and creepy but at the same time very good.

Great poem! Nice, short, and well written. :)

Oh! Creepy, creepy kind of like a vampire thing once you drink it you’re cursed to walk the earth, and survive by drinking the blood of others. On the other hand, if someone drank unicorn blood, once you drink it you’re shunned for drinking the blood of an innocent (Unicorns are considered pure and innocent.)