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| JaveHarron 2006-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery surreal magical realism story. One idea I had considered once was 'when Disney stories meet Brothers Grimm.' |
| Star of Lyra 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseWow, short and sweet. The premise is eerie, and the story gives the feeling of real life. The emotion felt in reading is deeper than the words portray it, if that makes any sense. In short, I like it. The quote from the original Mermaid is beautiful, and you let its theme flow perfectly into this one. A wonderful (yet very sad) comeback after so long away from fictionpress. |
| L. Damarik Laizare 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseHey...just got through with this story. A fairly good read, one I'm sure I'll stop by and read again a couple times. Sad ending though, and on today of all days as well. >>;(Just lost my cat to disease) Anywho...keep up the good work, I like reading short flicks like this. |
| poet tree 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseMy parents named me after that movie, actually. This is amazingly poigant. The part about Marilyn Manson made me laugh, because I was like that about a year ago, too. |
| LiveToTheFullest 2006-08-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is bloody amazing. I love it. |