 Mo Strife 2006-08-08 . chapter 1Um...yeah. No. What was THAT? Sounds like a pathetic piece of crap human being trying to convince herself more than her boyfriend that she's over him. GET A LIFE. I was in NO WAY moved by that. If you've broken up with a guy, why write a letter, whining, etc? Move on and shut up! Did you write this as an actual piece of literature?? Or did you write this because you're pathetic and wanted your old boyfriend to read it? It sounded a LOT like the latter. Sorry. Are you trying to be a serious writer? If so, get your butt in gear! |