 Nobody-n-Particular 2006-08-16 . chapter 1Nice image. |
 whisperofrain 2006-08-09 . chapter 1very beautiful! |
 Ygg 2006-08-09 . chapter 1Wow that is just... wonderful in its simplicity and breathtaking use of antagonistic images, like "beautiful" vs "forgotten" and "rain" vs "moonlight".. Very succinct and mysteriously obscure, leaving much of its possible connotations for the reader himself to discover. Wow, that is exactly how I think Haiku should be. Definitely a favorite :-) |
 Dale Christopher 2006-08-08 . chapter 1Very simple. Nor correct on syllables, but I think you'll find I really couldn't care less about the syllable rule. I even wrote a haiku about it. Anyway, nice job. |
 verifyme 2006-08-08 . chapter 1I thought haikus were lines of 5,7,5 syllables? Hm... It was still very beautiful though. Great work! |
 SomewhereShortOfAnIdiot 2006-08-08 . chapter 1Simple yet beautiful. Just as a Haiku should be :] |