This definately has the Dylanesque vibe and sound. Also skips and starts, like Woody Guthrie, Dylan's idol, and you've nailed both well. How it plays off the words before, and wraps the sound around itself in places truly enhances the texture and depth. As I enjoy the Dylan sound, this really was a joy to read. Excellent work.

amazing!! what say we get together some time and give dis baby a tune?

Live forever, or die trying!!

Love the message in this, and your diction. . . you're right, this does remind me of something Bob Dylan might have written. Great job.