ZOMG. NIENNA IS IN THIS. AWESOMENESS. I liked it. IT DIDN'T SUCK! I lurved it!

YAY FIRST REVIEW xD

Wait thats not a good thing D:

Well anyway, it was pretty good all through. You're the better writer after all...but, at the part where they're leaving the party, you didnt make it very clear that Alania went with them...just pointing that out xD

Other than that it was fine