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| Isca 2008-06-01 ch 1,  | abuse"But, I'm a rebel's daughter." Good line! Great structure and flow, and I loved the message of this piece; conveyed perfectly in the final two lines. |
| Getuie 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseI think what attracted my attention to this poem was its sense of personal description. It starts off with a proclamation and immediately the reader - having read a few preachy poems - thinks 'oh-oh, another one'; ready to place that judgement on it and move on. And then you bring in this fabulous line "But I'm a rebel's daughter" and you grab at me hard enough to force out previous perceptions and look at it anew. Then the next verse builds on that; reminding me of God's patient character, His gentle beckoning, his persistence and his longing... And I realise that I'm actually looking at one fabulous poem. Well done. It's good to be reminded of God's character. thanks for doing so. |
| Ghostwriter Revealed 2006-08-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful... I enjoy reading poems that praise the Lord. And you are great at it... God bless... keep writing. |
| Bunnie09 2006-08-08 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is really good. I'm athiest, but that doesn't mean I discriminate. Beautiful |
| dustytiger 2006-08-08 ch 1, | abusei really liked this peice a lot, i'm not spirtual myself but i've found that a lot of spirtual writtings are actually REALLY good, and more people should read them just to kind of get an idea of what faith, god and spirtuality mean to different people it's not all church-like and dull a lot of it very beautiful, such as this, thank you for sharing |