|Reviews for Heartbeat|
| ode to a firefly 4/18/07 . chapter 1
I can't believe I never reviewed this. I was going through old poems and finding some new favorites today, and I added this to my collection on my jump drive.
How did you get so good at writing haikus? P I'm jealous.
| Emmytastic gal 9/18/06 . chapter 1
gorgeous. Simple and beautiful, I love how it flows. awesome work :)
| Alyssa's Attic 8/29/06 . chapter 1
wow short but so powerful i love it, adding it to my favourites and i like ur user name :)
| chaos called creation 8/24/06 . chapter 1
the poetic anthem for all us die hard romantics.
(ps. i love your profile)
| Written 8/21/06 . chapter 1
whoa. beauutiful. fave-ing this one.
| Infinity Plus One 8/21/06 . chapter 1
| Nobody-n-Particular 8/16/06 . chapter 1
Very powerful - conveys a deep sense of intimacy.
| witchwriter 8/16/06 . chapter 1
| Basara 8/12/06 . chapter 1
| NeverComeDown 8/10/06 . chapter 1
short but sweet. for some reason I thought it was going to be about him dying...so it was pleasently surpirsed to read the rest of it. I like the fact that it is short, you get the point across fast, and it makes it sink in. Adding more would just make the poem run on and loose its meaning.
| not sure yet 8/10/06 . chapter 1
very cute, it's extremely enjoyable
| sunnytwilight 8/9/06 . chapter 1
oh...it's deep and innocent at the same time. :D
| Dale Christopher 8/8/06 . chapter 1
This is the perfect example of 'short & sweet' done properly. Anyone can string a few words together but not everyone can make them as romantic and sweet as this. Wonderful word choice and such obvious emotion between the lines. Perfect.
| SirScott 8/8/06 . chapter 1
Good poem about love- the art of getting so wrapped up in another person that you live your life for that person.
Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, SirScott
| dustytiger 8/8/06 . chapter 1
i've been there, great peice, thank you for sharing