| Reviews for Challange Me |
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thedarkthatiwas 8/11/06 . chapter 1This is what I need to be writing, right...? It's great... it's inspiring, it doesn't feel fake. It's not all faux sunshine and bunnies and supposed happiness, it's a beautiful real poem. I like it. It's optimistic... the first line really reminds me of me; fearful... perhaps that was the feeling, perhaps not... but yes. It's great. Aquila |
Nobody-n-Particular 8/9/06 . chapter 1I like the tone of this aided by the archaic use of language although "daren't" strikes me as a bit awkward - you definitely don't want people focusing on a word too long as awkward or forced so perhaps revise - but the rest is nice. Short and sweet. |
Dante The Animelover 8/9/06 . chapter 1A really heartfelt poem, It's really good and don't change thing. Hope to see more like this in the future, keep on typing :) |