Very interesting. I want to say existentialist-like, too. but I loved it.

Strong diction - perhaps a little more description although my feeling is that you wanted the dialogue to be the main force of this piece.

"Some of us create false hopes that there is something after death, some of us live for the moment, enjoying what they can, when they can."-thats clear.

i like this, but it too much reminds me of my own life and aquaintances