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| hateandkill-D 2007-01-07 ch 2,  | abuseCOOL! u ever gonna update? i love the idea and the executision(sp)though it seems kind of rushed at the beginning, but that might have just been the way i was reading it. Great job and keep it up! |
| andfound815 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseEh... Not THAT bad, but not fantastic either. The transition from NOW to MEMORY was very choppy. -R&R my novel EARTHSTONES, please! |