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| lonelyred-rose 2006-08-11 ch 1,  | abusei really like this poem.its awesome.keep writing,:) |
| Needa S 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseVery touching. Awesome tribute to your grandmother. Write on and God Bless ya! |
| Freed by Mercy 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseLovely. I especially like how you described what your granma looks like in heaven. I think you'd like my piece "Held in His Arms" a lot... |
| The Cavity 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseWell...its sweet. Your narration has a child like quality to it. So, I'm not sure if that was intentional or unintentional, but the narration really works for this poem. It would be useful if you would space this differently, or use a bit more punctuation because it sounds like a run-on,and I don't think that may have been your intent for the poem. But, I like this poem and think its extremely sweet |