i really like this poem.its awesome.keep writing,:)

Very touching. Awesome tribute to your grandmother. Write on and God Bless ya!

Lovely. I especially like how you described what your granma looks like in heaven.

I think you'd like my piece "Held in His Arms" a lot...

Well...its sweet. Your narration has a child like quality to it. So, I'm not sure if that was intentional or unintentional, but the narration really works for this poem. It would be useful if you would space this differently, or use a bit more punctuation because it sounds like a run-on,and I don't think that may have been your intent for the poem. But, I like this poem and think its extremely sweet