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poetic abortion 2006-08-23 . chapter 1
Beautiful.

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~* Noelle
if.these.bullets.could.talk 2006-08-15 . chapter 1
Well, I thought that was magnificent. Whatever you want to call it, a jelous rant or poetry, I think its amazing either way!

ex oh ex

- Lacey
smile persephone 2006-08-11 . chapter 1
This is a work of genius, seriously. It's unique and artistic. You articulate your feelings well. Nicely written!
notthecreepyfatguy 2006-08-10 . chapter 1
Jesus.Well I had to say that first because this poem surprised the monkeys out of the barrel.I really like it. I like it so much that I am going to put you on my favorites list. I also wanted to say thankyou for reading my poetry and reviewing it. I'm glad that you can relate to it, and after reading your profile I can see why. Oh I almost forgot! I really really really liked the line "But if nice guys finish last, then I should at least end up in the middle" Its really pretty and inspiring. I cant wait to read more of your stuff!
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