|Reviews for The end of what i thought was perfect|
| Sweetly Sarcastic 8/9/06 . chapter 1
i get how in this you're saying that you knew it would end up like that, and i've gotta say that it's true. unless you're in that one in a million couple that never breaks up and gets married and stays together and everything, you're going to face heart ache. but this is also good in other respects, because it is true that we never really heel from a broken heart, just stick a band-aid on it to stop the bleeding and move on- we don't wanto to know how their lives end up.
alright, so now i'm done telling you that everything you wrote was true, because you knew that. it was really a great song. if ever recorded, it would be in my 25 most played, for sure. it was great- both beautiful and melancholy
| Leaving Here 8/9/06 . chapter 1
this is really good! i like it!Liz