Wow. I love this. Your writing enthralls me and you always pick subjects that people can relate to. Well, maybe not relate, but empathize with. I apologize for not reviewing anything in a very long time but I am just getting back into writing, so hopefully you will soon get sick of me telling you I like everything you write!

the world seems like a pretty, fucked-up place to live in, i know. but even if you don't believe in God, at least believe in the good in humanity, otherwise... there's nothing to live for.

anyway...

i love how candid your writing is! your poems always make for a very interesting read!

I ADORE this poem. I completely relate, and I've a;ways wished that ppl would just answer me when I ask them questions-what I think are perfectly appropriate questions.

My problem is-I'm looking for answers. And maybe there are none.

But while I loved the whole subject of this piece, I REALLY liked the format. So simple and yet so nicely structured, cut in all the right places. It helped you pay more attention to the content.

Wonderful piece.

I'm sorry for what you went through. Please know not all Christians are like that.

Kill in my name, play my game, and never think for is all his message says. No, it's not at all what his message says, and it's terrible that you can rightfully think that from looking at the lives of Christians.

You have a point with "obey", yes. But I think it'd be even more accurate if you said "love, love, love".

I'm sorry if that sounds ridiculous.

I was an atheist for years. I was hated for it. I hated religion consequently. I'm not going to try and change your mind; I don't know your reasons, I don't know what you believe or why. But if nothing else, I promise it might be something else entirely - something so radically different than anything you've ever seen anyone else live. I'm sorry I can't do more.

Hmm. It is an interesting viewpoint, but I can't agree with it.

I this poem but I don't like the first line. I think it's weak. Like other folks say-I like "Obey Obey Obey."

Explains our current conflict to a T. You should have placed this within 'Wat' section, but what the heck.

I liked this. Makes me wonder, would I rather be imperfect than be a perfect bigot...

I like the 'obey, obey, obey' part, 'cause that's always been one of my biggest issues with organized religion. I just can't obey if I don't belive in what I'm obeying, even if that IS the only way for me to get into heaven (which I highly doubt is true.)

Good poem.

Strange I seem to be able to relate to most of your poems.

I totally get this one I would love to be believe in a like higher being but until people stop discrediting my questions then I can't.

Loving the poems really amx