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| in theory 2007-04-16 ch 1,  | abuseIt's pretty...but to be honest, the sentences kinda went on a bit. It's like a hybrid between poetry and prose, and there's a few too many adjectives for me to really get the image in my head before another one's crammed in. I like it though, a lot, just left me a little scrambled. |
| ken 2006-12-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseStupid prince charmings. Hail the knights! |
| give me back my childhood 2006-09-22 ch 1, | abuseOH MY GOODNESS. why haven't I seen your works before? I totally enjoyed the italic part. haha how the servant slays the dragon. and "that's what pretty boys do" clinched it for me. (: |
| luv me like no other 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseI like the idea. it's so funny, because it seems true, that the prince doesn't do stuff. Kinda reminds me of Shrek. |
| Zanisha 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abusewow xD .. i like this. your descriptions are really detailed, it's lovely. xD and the part in the brackets is, naturally, the best. :) [faves] - zanisha. |
| London Jansen 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abusehilarious. |
| andfound815 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseum... not sure what to make of this. someone else? R&R my novel, EARTHSTONES, please! |