I have to admit, this really unblocked the toilet of nostalgia, it's so good to see old names walking around again.Establishing chapters can be hard, as always, you need to grab the reader by the retinas and keep them engaged. Despite dealing with so many different characters and locations, you kept me interested aand above all, completely knowledgable as to the whole thing, not being confused at any point.The dialogue was decent, workable and not too pretentious, but it was when the narrative dived into the character's head that you were able to use pictures to paint 10 words. All the litte hints to mood and style really fleshed them out.Looking forward to the next piece.