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Very nicely written, with enough tension and curiosity to keep the reader reading to find out what happens.

PS. When are you going to put up the rest of it?

Very interesting story, I cant wait to see where this goes!!

About The End. i know that there is no force that can over take the US, i am just writing as if there was one, or maybe i will take your advice and have it be in the future where our allies have weakened with some other country. but keep up the good work and i will be waiting for more!!: ) *Mel

HEYO danevers me again.Your stuff is always so dark so convoluted so cunfusing. But that's why i like it. So keep it up and never get discouraged.

wonderfully and professionally written. beautiful and im very interested where it goes