hmm it's sad you're not udating this story anymore, it was getting pretty interesting! but anyway thatnks for writting this ^^i now have more inpiration for my upcoming vampyre fic! :D

Wow! Again, this is enthralling. Is there more, I hope there is more because that was so beautiful. It completely engrossed me, I felt like I was right there in thier world. Very well written.

Wow! This first chapter was amazing, you really know how to grab someone's attention. I love the words you use and how you use thm to survive. The name Aaric was really cool too. Did you make it up. I can't wait to read more and find out what happens.

this is a great story. please update soon. please

Wow! this Story Is GREAT! I have thoroughly enjoyed it! But It seems that you haven't written anything else in a really really long time! Which is too bad because your writing is amazing... I do wish you would continue in your endeavors but only if you truly want to because writing without wanting to can sometimes be disasterous!!

Very, very well done. You are very discriptive. I can't wait to read the rest.

This is a beautiful story- not necessarily in the normal sense of the word "beautiful", but well written, and I think there is great characterization. Keep writing it, and i will be an extremely happy fan.

I like your style. The whole mistress in control is a really good idea. So far this story draws me in, and i crave to know more. Can't wait to read on.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. For one, the scene where Aaric stood at the edge of her hospital bed and glared down at her has stuck with me for the last 24 hours. Seriousment. That is one hot vampire.

I also liked the part about the Mistress picking out underwear for her, and I could completely picture her regally declaring that the main character "use them well".

And during the "love scene", by using the term 'buttocks' rather than '**' you make it classy rather than... romance novel-ish. Props.

As for problems, nothing really stood out for me, so I'm sorry but I cannot critique you there.

Update. I want her to have a name. I want to know about that rival family. I want to know what she looks like! ... I want to know many things. :(

Peace.

Amazing. A detailed review when I finish reading. Just adding you to the favorites.

Wonderful story!! So sweet. I really like your writing style. Keep it up.

love it!

This is an awesome story. I love the way it is told and it has gotten me really interested. Please write more! Even if it has been a long time!

The story was exicuted wonderfully! I crave to hear more. So 'till you add the next chapter I will be awaiting.

~Hoshi & Fransisco~

I like vampire stories. This one is pretty cool. Its really well-written. Please update soon! ^_^
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