|Reviews for The Little boy and His Mommy!|
| rockye 12/26/06 . chapter 1
I like this poem. Keep up the good work. U have some corrections to do on spelling though.
Is:O what a grad time we had putting our toys away to!
Should be: O what a grand time we had putting our toys away, too!
| whisperofrain 8/9/06 . chapter 1
This is a cute little story. One suggestion- the language is sometimes wrong (we can't say "We singed).Great job!