This was a good essay. I liked your views here.

I also disagree with people who say that foreigners take all the good jobs. Foreigners don't take the good jobs unless by "good jobs" you mean construction work. The last time I saw a white construction worker was in the Village People. (Quote from a guy on TV the other day).

I mean, for Americans, we ARE pretty lazy; but when you have everything handed to you as soon as you're born, what else can you be? I know if I had to pick between working my ** off for less then a dollar a day in some 3rd world country and being the heiress to, say, a multibillion dollar guitar company like Fender; I'd pick the money.

I liked this essay. It brought up good points. (As for those shows on MTV like Cribs and My Super Sweet Sixteen; I don't even watch those because they ** me off. I mean, who wants to hear some bratty teenager ** about what she doesn't get for her birthday when she gets everything she wants anyway? And then at the end; no matter how terrible of a child she's been, BIG SURPRISE! She STILL gets a BMW... If I treated my momma like some of those girls treat theirs, I wouldn't get ** for my birthday... Ok, my rant is over... Don't listen to me... go write another awesome essay...)

LOL Later!

-Michelle

You spend too much time apologizing and not enough time building up evidence for your claims. It's as if you dropped a landmine and trying to back away from it for the rest of the essay. Steel yourself man! Don't be so afraid to express an opinion. It's a herding call for flames.

there weren't that many facts to approve your statement, but I still thought it was goodd.

Thanks for reviewing yeah some of my poems that I write free hand turn out like the one you reviewed.

Certainly, we'd all be so much more energetic and compassionate if every day was a struggle to survive. Or... something.