Oh I know where this is going!
so now that he filed for a reversal, he's gonna start to actually fall in love with Anna.
Then, when he actually wants to stay, the reversal will happen and it'll be permanent.
OH I LOVE THIS STOTY!

What? No!! Please update!!
I just found this story and I am absolutely loving it!

UPDATE SOON!1

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I want to read your 'serious' writing -

This story's very interesting! Your writing also seems different to some of the other stories i've read on fictionpress, it nice and refreshing :P Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reading this story again I realized that you already answered my Anna question. I don't know why I'm suddenly obsessed with this story but I can't wait until you update! There's this sad, empty feeling in this story that I love, especially when reading about Anna. I think I may make a FP account after all.

I'm new to this whole FP thing, but I can tell a good story when I see one, and this has so much potential. I love your stories. They are so blunt, so honest and down-to-earth, that even when they have completely absurd fantasy twists like the Fate character here, they still feel amazingly real.

Your characters are so strong and, again, so real. It's easy to identify with Noah's emptiness, and his confusion, and his battling ** and good guy tendencies. He's flawed. I love it. And I like Anna more than I ever thought I would. It was pretty heartbreaking when Noah asked her what it was like to be ugly. And it's even more heartbreaking that he's cheating on her now, and that she probably knows.

Maybe I'm wrong, but I feel almost certain that Matt and Anna were in love at some point too. Maybe it was Noah's choice to go pro bono that made Anna pick him over Matt? I can't wait until the next chapter, and more Noah-Anna-Matt interaction. Oh, and also, if Anna is so principled and passionate and all then why is she still in a money-driven firm?

Anyways, point being... this story is great. And I can't wait until you update again.

I really like your writing style and the fact that you're not sugar coating his personality. It's real even though the situation iteself is surreal. I hope he gets his mind together though because the way he's going he's going to hurt a lot of people.

And Sybil is going to be a problem if/when he starts to fall for Anna.

well that's not very nice of him. just ** about anna when he doesn't even know her. and then feeling a little guilty because of his affair with sybil. he doesn't sound very nice to me. but people change, and i'm sure he'll figure out why he's meant to be with anna.

sorry! I am actually following this story, I just haven't reviewed yet because your stories usually take some time to work themselves out. I mean, you don't make gross grammatical errors, so any comments I make are character driven, and well, right now there's nothing much that I can say except... I wonder what happened between Noah-Matt-and-Anna

Small, very small-- but I see a change in Noah. I hope he gets his head straightened out. It must be one hell of an awful journey for him... oh wait... he has a bed buddy in the "new life"-- not so bad for him.

I like how you write these "flashbacks."

Glad you're updating.

I can hardly wait for more.

i feel bad for anna vaughn. it seems that she leads a pretty awful life no matter what happens. my heart kind of broke for her when noah asked her what's it like to be ugly. it's just such an incredibly cruel thing to ask, but its this kind of bluntness that makes your story seem real (even though certain parts of it are obviously very unreal). i wonder what noah is like in this lifetime. pro bono work is certainly different from his high stress lifestyle before. his personality can't be exactly the same since he's had different experiences, but it looks like he's still a womanizer no matter how his life goes. pfft. i just feel like noah has the potential to be so much more than...an **, and i'm kind of sad that he's so cynical when it seems like he could do so much more with his life. but i'm sure you'll show us that potential by the end of the story so...update soon!

Yay! It's getting so interesting! I'm excited to read about Matt and Noah's reunion, as well as Noah and Anna's progressing romance - I hope SOMETHING goes down in their present life, romantic-wise. I'm still rooting for them!

Oh wow, this story is something else! The interesting twist and sheer ambiguity of the plot definitely keeps me reading. Noah and Anna don't even have a romantic relationship of any sort, but already I'm so engrossed in their story. You make me want to find out why brown suits are clothing Noah and in what setting did those two find love. I also find myself rooting for Noah to find his love for his wife within himself as well as the outside world. Your jump to various intervals of Noah's life initially confused me, but I've got the hang of it.

I'm glad I fatefully (pardon the pun, hehe) stumbled upon this entertaining story, and I hope you update soon! As much as I love the exposition of the story, I'm waiting for Noah and Anna's love to blossom...somehow.

Ah, you wouldn't understand how happy this update made me. I loved this story and had forgotten it... because no updates...

I can't wait for Noah to crash and burn-- he needs that.

Keep writing.