i forgive you! since i'm guilty of the same thing, and since this chapter was so good :)

hey man, an update's an update :P
good chap, can't wait to read more. update soon as you can, and i'll [try to] do the same!

OH! You update at last! And I just gotta say before I start with the review I've been reading the Anita Blake series too :) I'm on No. 12 Incubus Dreams. Glad to know someone else is reading it too.

Anyway, this was a good fun chapter, I liked the bit at the end with the question asking, lol. Derek's bisexual, eh? I'm kind of glad hehe. He likes Abe doesn't he? Oh Lordy, that's cute if he does.

I hope you tear yourself away from the Anita Blake stories and update again soon :)

Ciao!

haha WOW what a long time! psh i'm one to talk, i'm getting so behind on my updates...

loved the chapter, lots of stuff going in n whatnot. keep up the good work and update more PLEASE! =P

OkAY so here's the deal...I check my email and then i see NEW CHAPTER from Turdlock and of course my first thought is who the hell is turdlock. but then i saw "being there" and i remembered the story. SO um please dont wait another 5 years b4 we get the next chappie...and one question...do i really get to throw rocks at you? hehehe(psycho killer) jk its all good. but seriously update sooner

ooh i like i like! man sorry it took me so long to read this! i read about half of the chapter then couldn't finish... and then i guess i forgot.

then i remembered today and felt way bad!

i'm the same way... once school starts it seems like i can't even think of something to write. i'm trying to get out updates soon though!

Sorry for not reading sooner...School is really hectic, and I should be doing homework...but this is so much better!

Great chapter, waiting for more!

~Tzotel

Ha ha, very good. Jeff is such a creep. I dont think Derek is gay anyway another great chapter - update soon!

Wow, um, this was really great :) I don't think Derek is gay anymore...but then you could be trying to trick us, your naughty like that, Lol. I'm thinking so many things but I think I'll keep them to myself at the moment. I really do hope you update soon because I can't wait to read more ^_^'

Ciao!

That was awesome and that was my only fun for the day because now i have to do a 750 word paper on ** i dont know.

wow gd first chap! *claps* lol :D

now i want a friend like Abe! lol thats so unfair! *cries* lol he's kool and has nice hair and not forgetting the fact he has GREEN eyes! lol too bad he's gay... lol but he sounds like a kool character to write.

not forgetting Sca - the main character lol she's kool too can't wait to see wot happens!

kat x

short, sweet and to the point, i like :D lol

neways... i think u give us just the right amount of info to make us wanna read more and keep us interested.

kat x

I would love to have a friend like Abe, he's very funny. I like Sca as well she says stuff that i wish i could say to my family sometimes, so Dereks gonna live with them eh? intresting lol cant wait to the next part im adding this story to my fav. Stories list right now :)

hehe devoted fan back :D *yay cuggles!*

o so good...i like ashers bro...:D [i fall for fictional charaters all teh time]

move in...??!!:O

anywho..yeah oh k i undertsand with the name calling, and aww he carried her :D

so yah...lookin forward to it :P

i wana learn more about asher and his brother!

luff *devoted fan*

You've started school already? You poor thing! I don't start until sept 7...

Great chapter, it added alot to the story in ways of plot and just plain mystery...what was that about ** guys in the ally? HUH? What has this gril been through? Hm?

Update soon, or...or...or I'll eat you!Muahahaha! *insert more evil laughter here*

~Tzotel