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| firebenderZula 2006-08-16 ch 1,   | I love mythology so much! In my book, Mars is better than Ares, but I like the name Ares over Mars. |
| hanfiddle 2006-08-15 ch 1, | This is very good indeed - it keeps the lines separate (each one carrying a separate idea) while preserving cohesion because the poem is one sentence. |