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| Ygg 2006-08-17 ch 2,   | Simple and relaxing imagery.. good description! |
| Ygg 2006-08-17 ch 1, | Wow excellent last line! The visuals speak directly to the imagination of the reader. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-08-17 ch 1, | Cute. |
| the-foresight 2006-08-13 ch 1, | Very nice, especially the sage beauty line. |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-08-10 ch 1, | Excellent use of color and imagery. Good haiku. |