There were a few spelling mistakes that I saw... "As mush as I hate to admit it Archibald..." "What hair that was not involved in the massive not clung..." I would like a little more clarification (details), but overall you gave a great insight on your character and you still have me interested in what you have to say.

Where's the next chapter?!?! You had me completely absorded in your piece...I need more. It was great...short, but great. Hopefully you'll continue on with whatever it was that you had in store for this story. The only thing I saw...a simply spelling mistake, you said rob instead of robe...I can't wait to see what sort of plots, twists, characters, etc. you have in this story.