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| righthere431 2008-08-07 ch 1,  | abusewhat?! why would he kill himself? =/ |
| writingxonxwalls 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseAww- that was so (I really don't want to say this because a lot of people have already) heartbreaking. Bittersweet,- and extremely sad. Very well written- great job! |
| x3life 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abusethis was so good... but so depressing =( |
| Lily Llynn 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseHeartbreaking, this is. The last line especially. I'm a bit confused as to what it means, but I'll go with my own assumption (which just makes this even more depressing). Beautiful romance, beautiful writing. Depressing, yes, but an amazing oneshot, and I'm glad found.eventually added this to our c2. (: |
| Wunderbar 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseOh my, that was just... heartbreaking. I really wish he just asked her though, so he knew that she wasn't crying because she was unhappy! Maybe things would have been easier? Anyway, good job on the writing. You really captured their emotions well. :) |
| found.eventually 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseafter reading this piece, I just... stared. I don't know, a very strong emotion just flooded through me, and that's all I managed to do. I stared blankly at the computer. It was heartbreaking. I guess that's the only thing that describes what I'm feeling right now. But i think you mixed up the 'she's and the 'i's, so you might want to check that up. No matter. It was a wonderful piece, anyway. :) |
| saira 2008-02-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw this is just too sad. great writing though |
| candykillz 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseat least she didn't commit suicide. |
| drxxmcxtchxr 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseomg.. so sad... T_T |
| freakyAngel 2007-07-04 ch 1, | abuseWoah. Just... Woah. |
| Sarah's State of Grace 2007-03-05 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sad! oh my gosh! That poor man! And she loves him so much! Now she feels responseble! Aww! Poor things! This was so well written! You did a great job! |
| emerald 2007-03-04 ch 1, anon. | abuse**. You conveyed the emotions well, through pov writing and through the journal. Very well written. |
| jekodama 2007-02-17 ch 1, | abuseWow... It was an abrupt ending, yet I think it was perfect for the story. Well done. |
| akaCHEEKS 2007-01-11 ch 1, | abusewow. he wasn't contented enough to live for his family and live for his fiance. he practically left to be with his family. dude move on. that's pathetic. but good in a way i guess. |
| Rosemistress 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abuseok...wow...that's all i can say...i mean...woah. so short, yet so full of emotion! it even brought tears to my eyes!! [and though u don't know me, TRUST ME ON THIS ONE: getting my eyes watery is no easy task when it comes to stories, poetry, movies, or basically enough, something that is NOT my life]. so, yeah, this is really good! i really like it. though it leaves so many unanswered questions: why did he do it? if he had no courage to ask a question, how could he gather enough to suicide? did anyone else know? GOD! WHY DID HE DO IT?!! she's suffering so much more now!! *sigh* oh well...that's what one-shots do. and that's what i get for reading'em ^_^'. tho i like them this much, i can't get used to having so many unanswered questions in my mind. oh well...i'll set it aside with some other story. really good, though, very good. in fact, GREAT! |