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Reviews For: I Have Learned to Sew

Esquirella
2006-10-24
ch 1,
abuseI wish I could do poetry.
Ailonwy
2006-08-17
ch 1,
abuseOh... I like! It starts out depressing, then the last stanza kinda pulls an "in-your-face" recovery to the audience. After reading your last poem, I had to read more! You're now one of my favorite authors.
pneumothorax
2006-08-12
ch 1,
abuseVery good idea. Simply and creatively put together. Nice.
Widom
2006-08-10
ch 1, anon.
abusePirateGrrl! *pounce*

The thing about this story (or poem, I guess it is) is that I didn't read the category. I start reading, expecting sewing tips or something, and then I got to the last paragraph. Suddenly, everything made sense! *dumb laughter* Right. It's the morning.Well written, and true.
Marry My Pie Please
2006-08-10
ch 1,
abuseI absolutely love sewing. It's like a meditation process to me. Your poem is very well written and it seems you enjoy (or at least know) the process very well. Good work.
square root
2006-08-10
ch 1,
abuseVery eloquent.
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