I wish I could do poetry.

Oh... I like! It starts out depressing, then the last stanza kinda pulls an "in-your-face" recovery to the audience. After reading your last poem, I had to read more! You're now one of my favorite authors.

Very good idea. Simply and creatively put together. Nice.

PirateGrrl! *pounce*

The thing about this story (or poem, I guess it is) is that I didn't read the category. I start reading, expecting sewing tips or something, and then I got to the last paragraph. Suddenly, everything made sense! *dumb laughter* Right. It's the morning.Well written, and true.

I absolutely love sewing. It's like a meditation process to me. Your poem is very well written and it seems you enjoy (or at least know) the process very well. Good work.

Very eloquent.