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| Esquirella 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI wish I could do poetry. |
| Ailonwy 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abuseOh... I like! It starts out depressing, then the last stanza kinda pulls an "in-your-face" recovery to the audience. After reading your last poem, I had to read more! You're now one of my favorite authors. |
| pneumothorax 2006-08-12 ch 1, | abuseVery good idea. Simply and creatively put together. Nice. |
| Widom 2006-08-10 ch 1, anon. | abusePirateGrrl! *pounce* The thing about this story (or poem, I guess it is) is that I didn't read the category. I start reading, expecting sewing tips or something, and then I got to the last paragraph. Suddenly, everything made sense! *dumb laughter* Right. It's the morning.Well written, and true. |
| Marry My Pie Please 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love sewing. It's like a meditation process to me. Your poem is very well written and it seems you enjoy (or at least know) the process very well. Good work. |
| square root 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseVery eloquent. |