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fatsoko 2008-05-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseI've actually read Once and Future Queen and really liked the tone of the story. I'm currently working on its sequel and also wanted to read this story. The concept is fresh so I'm excited. Thank you for writing.
DarK-FreEdoM 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abuseI realize you already have 11 chapters of this story but as of right now i cannot continue my reading since i must go to work :(. It's very sad i know, considering im already hooked on this story after one chapter. Your stories seem to do that to me. lol Well can't wait to read more :) DarK-FreEdoM
heslikecoughsyrup 2007-10-24 ch 11,	abusec: c: c: this is fantastic. please update, c:
Vivian 2007-07-30 ch 11, anon.	abuseWhoa. Your writing is amazing. The characters are so real and the plot, intriguing. I love that fact that most of your characters’ complexities are some-what exposed and that they all have some sort of relationship amongst one another. I have my favorites, ha ha. All of the characters are interesting and I hope to learn more about them! Anyway, I hope you update soon because I cannot wait to see and read what else you have in store!
Lily Silver 2007-07-19 ch 11, anon.	abuseI've just read this all in one sitting, and I'm so disappointed to see it's incomplete :( You now have me hooked on the story of the Askari family. I decided to read this story when I stumbled across your deviantart page - your artwork is fantastic and you give all your characters such depth with their personality and interactions with each other. Granted, you have an advantage because you can draw the characters, but even in text form, everything and everyone can be visualised to perfection. There were several grammar errors here and there, but it was nothing major that stopped me from reading on. I especially like Abigail and Valefor and their complicated relationship. You have managed to capture such a variety of exciting people, moments and conversations and I really hope you'll be updating soon :) Thanks for such a great story.
kokorosenshi 2007-06-01 ch 2,	abuseAnother great story from you, I must say, how and where did you get the inspiration for this. You write as if you were a professional writer, or at least taking some classes at a local college, non the less, they are very interesting. The way the story clears up after leaving the reader in the dark hungering for more. How the characters interact with each other, the words you use paints a clear image of the scene, it is as if I'm not reading at all, but rather watching a program or a movie.
kokorosenshi 2007-06-01 ch 1,	abuseHey, just read your story this morning after staying up all night, and well...its good. I was about to go to sleep till I wanted to read something in this site that didn't bore me to death. Actually, this chapter alone took my neccessity for sleep away, can't wait to read the other chpaters.
EezleD 2007-05-31 ch 1,	abuseI had been reading this on deviantart. So the story along with the artwork you had created with it was amazing.
RinoAlchemist 2007-04-19 ch 1,	abuseWow! You're so amazing! I found about the askari in Deviantart! By the way, sorry my bad english. Anyway. You make feel so happy when I read about that cool family!! Please hurry up with the next chapters!! I Love AJax! He is so cute!! And like we will say in my country: Ve por ello, niña! I really know that you one day are going to be a superstar!
erinox 2007-02-23 ch 1,	abusenice first chapter. btw. I've seen your stuff on deviantart, and i like it a lot..
Kami 2006-09-25 ch 2, anon.	abuseOhh I've been seeing you submit image after image on deviantart, and had to seek around for this story.So very good :D Love the character development throughout the two chapters, hope you'll submit more soon too!
Snapdragon 2006-09-22 ch 2, anon.	abuseI love this so much, but will we be seeing more??
AM 2006-09-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou're such an awesome writer @__@ My god.. Hope to see a new chapter soon 8D
Snapdragon 2006-08-14 ch 2, anon.	abuseAnother excellent chapter! I really, really love the characters. Valefor is such a sweetie. And Ajax and Tom are adorable! Your writing style is so brilliant. Keep it up!
Snapdragon 2006-08-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseYour writing is so brilliant. You've got the potential to go really far! I can't wait to read more.

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