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Reviews For: The Sun
Guardrail 2006-09-11 . chapter 1
Wonderful. I love the lines, "and clouds move across time." Definately keep writing.
Ds14 2006-08-15 . chapter 1
Great way of sticking so much into so little! I liked it a lot.
Countess Chocula 2006-08-11 . chapter 1
I love the middle line. Beautiful.
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