''do you really want to know / why i'm crying / why i say 'i'm sorry' ''

wow, such a strange mysterious peice, i'm really drawn to it somehow - keep it up :}

This poem is so great! ^_^ I love your use of questions and whys. My favorite part is 'Do you really want to know / Why I'm crying / Why I say 'I'm sorry' The end was a surprise to me, but a good one. Keep writing!