Are you dead? Or asphyxiating beneath mountains of schoolwork? Drop me a line sometime.

I happen to be working on a full proofread (with margin notes! ^^) of the MFT document you sent me AGES ago. I'll write you an email saying the same, since I don't know when the last time was that you logged on to this site.

Also: in the last sentence of this chapter, I think the original "murderous spy" is better than "murderous faction." "Assassin" would be good too. Keep on,
~Matt

Sad: I STILL haven't had the time to re-read the old MFT file you sent me.

Sadder: I'll never be able to write fantasy like you can. In case I haven't said it before, your dialects are a great asset. The more you chuck in, the better!

Seems like you may have disappeared from ficpress. Well, drop me a line if you ever come across this review.

~~Your pal, DMT

I like the way Nitera talks, seems creative.