You have talent. First verse is very nice.

The whole feeling is similar to that of Mr. Frost's works. I love it. The second stanza is just...wow.

Very good piece! I loved the mysterious vibe and everything. It does remind me of Frost, but I can't place what poem it reminds me of. Anyway, great job!

-Brittney

P.S. Thanks for the reviews, I appreciated them. Best wishes on your future writing.

. . . Huh. Interesting enough. I'd probably like it if I were in a better mood, so, just to be safe, I'll put it on my faves and read it later, THEN tell you how good you are. 'Kay? ^^