Neat ending, although you've muddled the tenses a little in places. :-) I'm assuming you wanted the whole chapter in present tense...

Hey! I *liked* Casey in the old story! Now he's just immature... ugh.

Wow. It's very interesting how you've *completely* altered the story and yet you're still using more or less the same scenes from your first story. :-)

Wow, Denise is far more broody/angsty than last time...

Whoa... Casey's kinda clingy, wouldn't you say? :-) That's something of an abrupt reaction...

Okay, I'm confused... I thought this was a sequel/update, but the story's pretty different. :-)

we finally!

adventure seeker: was it supposed to be ominous? Not really, but you can read it any way you want. :P

Am I right to find the whole Mark and Dom whixpering to each other thing creepy? *eyes them worriedly*

And *whine* I want Denise and Casey to be speaking again.

I'd just like to point out: well done, I can't remember the last time a non-slash fic held my attention like this *applause* Good chapter, my dear.

*whimpers at the impending doominess* Oh dear, oh dear. I like Mark... oh but... Casey's overreacting right? Denise doesn't really have a thing for Mark? *hopehope*

Aw, good chapter, but aw...

A delight to read, as always. There's going to be more about Dom right? *likes Dom* Mark reminds me of my friend Ben... *thoughtful*

Good chapter, keep it up :)

Poor Casey but he gets all ignored! And... and... I just see it going all wrong.

Good chapter, if tauntingly short. Keep it up :)

You're welcome, m'dear. *stalks fic* Of course if you felt the urge to go and review any of my fics, I'd be equally grateful. *grins hintingly*

adventureseeker:why poor Casey? He got what he wanted, didn't he? :PThanks for all the reviews!

Oh, I love Casey. Poor guy. *cuddles him* Still loving this story. Keep it up :)

Ooh it's good! Sadly my inner-slashfangirl is begging Casey and Jeff to end up together, but I shall suppress her.

Yay. I love the way you write interactions between characters, feels so natural. Keep up the good work, I wanna know how things get to where you started.