Hahaha, so good! The end is funny, and some of the dialogue...those two are weird. It's good. Yeah.

To anyone who may have been confused by the whole "wrong category" thing, I've righted the wrong and this story is no longer in the Sci Fi section. Honestly, how it ended up there is a mystery, but it's been fixed. No more confusion. :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

--EKB

tht was a pretty gd question lol

great one-shot, hope to hear more from u soon.

First things first. I like the story, it was well written and very sensual. You really get the feeling that this guy is a chick-magnet, and that he knows it.

The cat is very like a real cat, unpredictable, fast, and intelligent, and the girl is so very vulnerable!

I think a couple less adjectives in the first paragraph or two would really settle those sections down. After that, the rest of the story went great!

Only one spelling mistake that I caught: "she knew wee his capabilities" I think it was supposed to be "well" instead of "wee," but I didn't write it, so I am not sure.

I only have one question - Why was it in the Sci-Fi category?

Thanks for sharing your talent :)

D.