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| NO LONGER USING 2006-08-17 ch 1,  | abuseVery nicely written. Great job! ~ Lacy |
| Kir Sirin 2006-08-12 ch 1, | abuseI dont.. Really know how to review a poem, but... I guess I'll try. As everything else you do, I liked this poem. It's cool how you make it ryhme and make sense at the same time. It sounds like it would sound better as a song, rather than a poem. I hope I spelled "poem" right... Heh, but anyways. I liked it. My favorite line was: "These things, my soul yearns to call my own.And many a night I’ve thought of this.And came to the conclusion.To be loved, and to love, you must first have a home" Okay it's a bunch of lines, but I still loved it.-Kir |