Reviews for The Girl Next Door

Ellica Dramis 2007-06-25 ch 2,	abusewow... this is a lot different than, um, other stuff i've read... but i still like it...
Ellica Dramis 2007-06-25 ch 1,	abusevery interesting... i like it.
Tatsu-Dreamer 2006-09-19 ch 2,	abuseWow the insanity of Mary comes through slowly till the end. She drags you into her reality slowly so you can't turn back. Very creepy.
Autumnymph 2006-09-05 ch 2,	abuseVery, very interesting concept. I'm reading this you hear?
Drizit 2006-08-14 ch 2,	abuseDood... that's just so... wow. And a man f* another man? Wow. Didn't know you were getting into that territory.
LancerDragoon 2006-08-13 ch 1,	abuseCreepy, if I may say so. (You'd probably think of it as a compliment anyway.) Nicely done, interesting concept, but! It's still way too vague. Perhaps it's meant that way, but the questions... sometimes hinder the enjoying process. For example, where ARE they? Why are they being kept there, apart from the obvious "Hey I killed someone!" reason. Still, I liked this.
myheartbelongstosuperman 2006-08-10 ch 1,	abuseCreepy... I love the idea of the story being told through note-passing. Great job!
SunnyOblivion 2006-08-10 ch 2,	abuseI like how you're writing this in the form of notes between two people. Not what you'd expect with a title like "The Girl Next Door" but I'm glad. The way Mary talks (or uh...writes) sends shivers down my spine. It's creepy. Hope you update soon.