So far it's a great story, but I'm still noticing a lot of mistakes that would be easily fixed by having one or two people read through before you post it. It would make it better if some of the simpler mistakes were fixed.
I really like the idea and the way it's told, but some of the sentences don't really flow together well or they just seem more forced than they should, like descriptions for clothing. Good descriptions, but if each sentence starts with "He wore" or "She wore" about the one persons clothing it seems very repetitive.

Sorry for the long review, and I don't mean to come off rudely at all if I am, but this is a good story and if a few minor mistakes were fixed it would be even better.

yay!!
new part!
wonder why charlie is seeing all this..

love ur story!!
update soon plzz

Looks Jessica and Amelia are starting to heat up lol. I love the story so far hun. Hope you update some more.

Cool you have a sequel. I was lazy so I never rated until now XD. But you've got a talent well to me you do. I cant wait for your next one to come out.

Holy shiiznoodles that is creepy! Charlie got the worst of it I feel bad for him. O.O Update as soon as possible!

-gasp- What are they seeing? Are they signs? Well, I'm just glad that you are writing again! ^o^ Update asap

LOL!! IM SO GLAD U FINALLY UPDATED!! :D! I WAS ROTFL WHEN LUCY ORDERED THEIR FOOD!! HAHAHA!! KEEP GOING I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER FOREVER!! AND THIS BRINGS ME MUCH HAPPINES!! :D Poor Sally/nerd lol kidding.

It's a good chapter. I'm glad I'm not the only who likes to use alot of detail lol. I can't to keep reading.

HURRY UP WITH THE NEW CHAPTER!! I NEED IT!

hurry up and get the next chapter in haha i love this story!keep writing!

Wow! Sounds like Miss Amelia and Miss jessica have a dirty little secret. Oh and it would only be copy right if you took the whole song and said you wrote it.

Same old gang. Glad to Lucy is still her slightlt glumpsy self hope you continue this story hun.

Falling off couches, that's Lucy for ya. Great chapter. You should update more often.

i really enjoyde high school hell. please keep updating the seqel. i hate it when people stop in the middle of a story and never finish it.