 C.F. Anne 2006-12-21 . chapter 1Oh, It's SO SAD! i feel so sorry for the mermaid. You wrote so beautifully and it was so engaging that i just had to finish it. Too bad the prince and the mermaid couldn't be together. anyway, like i said...wonderful, and beatiful writing. i also love the fact that you added the other condition that to return as a mermaid she would have to kill the prince. Oh, so suspencful, even in that little bit. Absolutly beautiful. (i think i've said that enough...lol) It's true though. (: |
 Lizzykai 2006-11-10 . chapter 1The language and imagery are beautiful! Not quite the Disney version at all! Very well done, and captivating to read :) |
 Maranwe Telrunya 2006-10-10 . chapter 1I never liked the little mermaid... then, all I ever saw was the disney version and the other reviews say this is closer to the non disney story. But this was so sad and depressing... =( You're pretty good at writing tragic twists.
=D Maranwe Telrunya |
 SpawnMeister666 2006-10-07 . chapter 1Again, a rather bizarre tale. I don't know what I really think about it, but this may have something to do with the lack of sleep I've been experiencing lately!
A well written piece though, and nothing in particular stands out as being wrong with it.
Spawny |
 JJSLAM2129 2006-10-04 . chapter 1Oh, such a sad story, but the original H.C. Anderson version is far better! Little Mermaid rocks!...There I said it. Great job, keep up the great work! ( :: ) |
 Winter Flurry 2006-09-12 . chapter 1OH! I love the original version of this so much, and I really love you're twist to it. xD I read your homepage...you can't possibly be as insane as me when I'm at my worst. ^^
-Winter Flurry |
 An Inside Joke 2006-09-12 . chapter 1Way to let the reader look into her mind, very well written. I don't really understand how this is a twist, since it seems to follow the traditional (non-Disney) story, but it's pretty good, anyway. |
 Sakka-Fenikkusu 2006-09-06 . chapter 1Depressing but good. FAVES! |
 SlvrSoleAlchmst1 2006-08-29 . chapter 1Aw, poor little mermaid! I liked this one too. Nicely done! |
 JennieMR 2006-08-22 . chapter 1Wow, you write really well! And this is sad. :-( lol Glad the Disney version didn't end like this!Thanks for your review, by the way, and yeah, I'm real impressed with your writing. Very good at describing things! |
 elisefey 2006-08-14 . chapter 1I love this! Nicely done capturing the emotions of the original "Little Mermaid" as the story was meant to be told. |
 Angel Jenna 2006-08-11 . chapter 1That is a good twist off the original little mermaid but very sad. Great job. |
 Moni 2006-08-10 . chapter 1 Good job on this one, the theme of this story fits with the theme of the fairy tale perfectly. |